This has great potential

Thank you for the opportunity to read your work!

I liked the idea of the story from the start. It's an interesting concept, and it's whimsical and dark at times. I love the idea of trying to explain the feelings of Anne through her dreams. I just wish it was easier to follow. I found it hard to follow the story from start to finish. I think a little more description would help the story to flow better. If changes were ever made to it, I would love to read it again and give it another chance.

Best of luck with this and future endeavors!