So Much Potential! Please Don't Give Up!
When I saw the title and premise of Three Dreams of Anne Frank, it sounded like an idea that had a huge amount of potential. I was very excited to start reading it. When I first requested to review it, I really wasn't expecting it to be as short as it is. But, despite the shortness of the book, I had trouble staying focused and almost didn't finish it. First off, I really think that you have a great idea and that there is a ton of potential, that just didn't get used. It needed much more character development and plot development. Honestly, I think that you can do so much more with this story than you did and would love to see it if you do decide to continue writing. I am not posting this review on amazon or any other site, as I really did not enjoy reading the book. I'm sorry.